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OBJECTION!!!

Court declares that she is checked, assholes! If the defendant's testimony serves true, you are forced to service of 10 years of kick-ass art!

Phoenix Wright jokes aside, this was overall pretty damn good. Her pose, itself, just seems a bit awry. It makes it seem like...idk what to put of it. It just isn't natural...but hence it's a cartoon, I'll just let it pass and get on to some other matters.

So is she bow-legged or can she not put her legs together that close for fear that her penis will show through?

What I want to know is...

How do you guys get this type of art style to work out? I've seen 3 users so far (including you) with the same kind of artwork. It's actually really bugging me, so if you could answer my question (either comment or via PM), it would be appreciated.

Now, on the actualy review side, the only thing that I could find a problem with is that the dog's pose is a little awry, is seemed. It just doesn't look like it should be natural at all (like it's natural anyway with a dog and all, but you get what I'm saying...I hope, anyway). Other than that, I find this piece to be very well done overall. I hope to see more like this....and I probably will too. ;)

you know she likes...

F out of all of them. It ought to be true. well, anyway, the art was overall pretty damn good. maybe you should go into anime porno buisness....or not, whichever one you think.

Very good.

I have to say, you are very good at what you do. Although you're used to things like gay jokes, all that yada yada bullshit, you should really try out a job as a cartoonist for a newspaper. You just have to work on your jokes being more PC (Politically Correct).

I'm not sure if it's just the way of the cartoonist, but I was thinking that you should've just traced the last two panels (for Link and the background) over the original one that you did. Just a suggestion.

It's humorous...

Honestly, (sophisticated these comics ain't) you're becoming more complicated with your thought process of these comics. When you put the tab for "Everyone" you should have thought ahead of some of the people that can't comprehend the joke or the matter at hand. I, thank the gods, am not one of those people. Besides that, this comic is funny, but I honestly think that you should at least put the tab for a "Teen" rating and up, depending on how sophisticated the comic is at the time.

may I ask....

how much free time do you have on your hands to make all this? I mean, seriously, where do you find the time to do this at the office?

anyway, the art is good, I have to admit. You're a master at these kind of sculptures.

MindChamber responds:

i did this on my free time

She needs help!

....well, more like the person who's gonna rape her needs help. Seriously, if those things just popped out....wow....

anyway, the detail is very good, I have to say. I want to ask though, why in the world do all the girls look shy? it's something that's been bugging me.

Vortex00 responds:

lol, that's just how I roll.

Awesome.

Total awesomeness. One of the best pages, as I see. The reason I say this is because I think there were some art errors here and there on the last few pages. Some grammar errors too (the grammar's just as important as the art.)

Sorrygirl99 responds:

.......
oh......
okay..
thanks ^.^

Very good.

Finally some humor in the comic. Btw, I don't think there has to be quotes around Mr. Sarcastic. Just a little error though.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

... i like the quotes...
it also tells the readers that its not his real name XD

Very good.

I can tell that you put a lot of detail into this piece of art. It may not be a Jeff style of art, but it's pretty damn close. One of the best pieces of art I've seen by a mod. I hope to see more art like this from you.

Hi, my name's Jake. I animate and program stuff for a living......*smile*

Jake @FourSwordsKing

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Ohio,USA

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