FourSwordsKing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mystic Quest episode 1]

6 frames per second?

That's a little slow for a sprite animation, don't you think? I mean, the average speed would be 24 FPS for a sprite animation if you add 2 frames step of someone walking. 12 FPS for 1 frame. yeah. It's pretty good, but it seems lagging....no brainer, I would supposed.

CubePanda responds:

I know, but it was my first Flash. I'm much better :3

[LoZ: The Show Must Go On]

This is good.

This is good. The music choice is good, I have to say, but there's something about this that puts me off edge. Is it the fact that maybe, it seems, that the effort put into this could've been better? Or is it the fact that this video, this animation.....is a little.....profound, I guess. Well, it's good, but not great.

[Short : The Twitter Song]

Wow....

just wow. The animation was smooth, I must admit, but it's sort of insulting to see what you did. Some of the keys weren't even hit and they still went down. You'll have to work on that. Try to get things like they should instead of just making his hands go up and down at random. Have some basic knowledge of the instrument and make it go up or down when it's SUPPOSED TO.

All that being said, 8/10, 4/5.

psychicpebbles responds:

Thanks for the review. I know, the keyboard was I think one of the biggest bitches I've had to animate in a while...but thanks for the that.

[Zooky Explains]

Ugh.

Definitely not your best flash animation. Something must've fucked up the audio (trust me, it happens.) I know that something must've done that is because no mic quality is that bad. The main problem I see here: Lip Syncing. No offense to you Storm, but your lip syncing's horrible. You have been submitting flashes that are way out of sync. Even if it takes a while, go and take the syncing frame by frame. You just can't put random mouths here and there. Try again Here's the overall rating.

Animation: 6/10.
Voice: 2/10
Overall: 4/10.

~FSK~

[Funny LOZ Battle]

Not that bad.

except I would try to add more of a plot to this. Some advice: do NOT submit a flash unless you are expierience with the kind of animation you're using. As I look at this, this flash is very well animated, especially for your first sprite animation. I would try getting a little bit better at this.

Overall:
Animation: 8/10
Humor: 4/10

And that rounds up to 6/10, 3/5. Good for you first.

Llama555 responds:

Thanks for the advise :)

[Metal Gear Awesome 2]

There. I did it.

I finally decided to sit down and watch the entire Metal Gear Awesome series. I have to say, it's pretty damn funny, but it's not all to get worked up over. People think this is cool just because of the humor used (no offense to you egoraptor) and the user who makes it. They need to look past that and at the animation and quality of that itself. It's a very good flash overall, I would like it to be just a LITTLE more smooth, if possible. Great job.

~FSK~

[Street Fighter Club]

Not actually that bad.

Personally, I'm not that big a fan of street fighter. In fact, I've never played it once in my life lol. Well, animation was superb, I'd have to say. It seems that sometimes mouths weren't in the right place at the right time, though. You may want to work on it a little bit. Good job.

~FSK~

[A FBF Animation.]

Good.

But not great. First of all, I'd like to see more put into this (don't get me wrong, the artistic skills are good) and maybe you SHOULD just stick to tweening. It's the easy way out, but you'll get a lot more done that way.

ForNoReason responds:

Thanks for the review man.

[Awesome Compilation Vol 6]

Very impressive.

So, I've watched all of your series, and people say that they are "awesome" (hence the name) but they don't really look at the effort put into a flash. They just want something that can make them laugh or cry, etc. I'm sick and tired of that. I'm going to put the record straight.

Animation Effort

Now, animation put into this runs smooth, but could be much better if you just worked a little longer. So, I'd say that this deserves a 7/10.

Voicing Effort
I can tell that you really get into your voices when you did this. It's very good and most people don't like getting into things like this. 10/10

Well, I liked the compilation, just not as much as others. This deserves at least and 8/10 for seeing that you at least put some effort into this. Overall, great flash, just try a little harder.

Btw, to all the people who vote 5, gives him 10 stars on a review just because he's your favorite author, look at the flash first before you vote or anything.

[Jerry: The End]

Very....different....

This isn't your usual style of flash-work, I know, but you set off an appearence of heatwarming and soothing so easily. Basically, you're very well rounded when it comes to the arts of flash. One of your best, but at the same time, definintelly not the best.

9/10, 5/5.